| A linear graph like this one, although this graph does not have the slope I mentioned. |
Instead, I feel that the characters in this book become more mature sometimes, such as when they are planning the trip or gathering supplies, but at other times, the characters are incredibly immature, such as when they are angry at the mice so they kill them or they are terrified of the noise in the woods, assume it’s a pair of bears (that rhymes!) and decide to fight these bears with nail clippers. Maybe just the general inconsistency of their development differentiates these characters’ changes from those of characters in fiction books, since it is a more realistic pattern of change (up down up down etc.). In this way, the constant changing of characters in this book follows more closely a cosine curve (starting at the top, where they were fully mature as middle-aged men, then starting to decline as they hike the trail, where they reach their minimum immature-ness and begin to climb back up to maturity, no pun intended).
| Here is the infamous cosine graph |
I think this also helps exemplify the mysticism of the trail and the unusual effects it has on people, and the isolation people feel on the trail from the rest of the world, which connects back up to Bryson’s quote I mentioned before about the lack of normal civility on the trail. However, I think I am going to stop writing now, because when you start seeing plot structures as trigonometric functions, I think that’s a small hint that you have written more than enough...
Haha that was a great post; the graphs and side comments really pulled it all together. In my opinion too, a book is definitely better when you can relate to it, so I hope that experience really is adding something to this read. I'm a little curious about the fighting-bears-with-nail-clippers experience - I also get what you mean by saying it's more realistic. I doubt that being surprised by that situation would mean you have a clear and rational reaction... Anyway, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and maybe you'll find a different way to visualize the plot structure. Happy reading! :)
ReplyDeleteWow Ari, amazing review so far! Okay so I had numerous different reactions throughout your post. First, I was also dissapointed that the author + friend skipped the Smokey Mountains! That was the one area of the Appalachian trail that I hiked (well, not really hike, but it was a cool place nonetheless). Anyways, yeah what a bummer not being able to brag that you hiked the whole trail. Next, I was in shock. If someone gets angry at mice they don't just kill them - are you sure this is a dip in maturity, or is this just an increase in crazy? Also, how clever mixing math into this! I just get headaches looking at anything that has to do with precalc, but I followed your analysis all the way through and it made sense. You mentioned at the end of your last blog post that you wanted the main characters to encounter bears, but that they probably won't. Maybe they will because there is a giant bear face on the cover of the book. If they do encounter a bear, please share what happens in the battle of nail clippers vs. claws.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds really interesting - you seem to have good taste in books.
I can't wait for your final review
-Ashley